Critique me 

If I could paint

I’d lock myself within blank walls,

stare at your photograph

That is on the back of my new bookmarks (a recent marketing attempt on my behalf, my social media info is on the other side)

What do you think? 

Is it a poem ? 

Why or why not?

What does it mean?

Does it mean anything?

Is it simplistic ?

Is it lazy?

There’s an eternal debate over the importance of a creative’s intent on the meaning of their creations, and I most definitely know what it means to me, but I don’t intend for it to mean the same (or anything in particular) for you.

Does that make a difference? 

Comment your responses, I’d love to know what you think

Or hit me on social media @sinspokenword

My therapy tour is wrapping up this month so if you’d like to come hear me ask a million questions live I’ll be at 

The Dock Bookshop in Fort Worth TX Tuesday the 2

Franky Diablos in San Antonio TX Sunday the 14

And the Baobab Stage in Las Vegas NV Saturday the 27

Pictures from shows coming soon,

Til next time

Sin.

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